Wednesday, September 23, 2009

My BLOCKING WIP



This is my blocking , The End needs a lot of work,its a wip version. C&C plz.
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7 comments:

  1. AmareshSeptember 23, 2009 at 10:48 AM

    Its coming out grate :)

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  2. AnandSeptember 23, 2009 at 11:37 AM

    Awesome Karan..

    The mechanics are great. I love the balancing part.
    Some choices i would make..
    35x to 52x ,For this move, i would not go up with the breakdown rather i would go in a fast smear like transition from pose 35 to 52.

    273x - 278x The take(overshoot) is too big. Its not syncing in for me.

    287 jump inside the hole- i think if the jump can be done without the anticipation and going up in air , it would appear more hurried. More of a urgent jump in than a typical antic jump. hope am clear.
    My two cents... Rock on..

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  3. Prashant YadavSeptember 23, 2009 at 8:02 PM

    It's looking nice,
    you can skip that sweating action around 250 frames or try something else now it's looking unnecessary drama,rest is looking fine.

    Can't wait to see the animation version.

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  4. PHILIPSeptember 23, 2009 at 9:58 PM

    I agree with Prashants comments.I'd suggest removing the sweating action and a few reaction in reaction to it.It just slows down the whole thing.Doesn't seem to achieve anything from an audience POV.This was the first thing caught my attention.

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  5. PHILIPSeptember 23, 2009 at 11:09 PM

    The way he slips at around 165 is beauty.Maybe giving him some hang time in the air(a small one) before he falls head-on on the latch wud add a nice touch.After opening the latch he can straight away go into looking at the missile skipping the 'Sweat' part.Maybe a li'l relaxed gesture if u want instead of the whhole 'sweat wiping' thing.

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  6. AnandSeptember 23, 2009 at 11:22 PM

    I agree with Philip and Prashanth. May be you can hold pose 212 and go bit relaxed , still maintaining the tension.

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  7. Karan3DSeptember 24, 2009 at 10:05 AM

    Thanks Amaresh, Anand, Prashant and Phiilip For all these comments . I am working on some changes and will post it soon.

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