Monday, September 21, 2009

11second club "1st pass"

hi guys,
changed my concept n re blocked it, took it to the 1st pass..check it out n give in ur reviews..
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3 comments:

  1. Prashant YadavSeptember 21, 2009 at 4:54 AM

    when she is saying "who do u think u r talking to" u can add some strong poses facing to other character.
    about camera 2 many cuts r there.
    If u just keep camera 2 and camera 3 for whole shot I think it will be nice.

    Keep Going

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  2. DamodarSeptember 21, 2009 at 8:45 AM

    Hi Nice layout....Looks good ,But idea is not clear to me ....story is not readable to me ..when she says ever there is some hitting sound ,may b u can make use of this sound by making her throw some object she is already holding in her right hand (right hand on the hip looks odd)also I dont know why she is getting relax after her first dialogue gets over..Also I agree with prashant there are too many camera cuts...

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  3. Harish kSeptember 22, 2009 at 8:42 PM

    thx for the comments..i will work on it n keep it updated..

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