its too straight to the point. I think U should play with the gag here, may be show him strugglin a bit before the rocket takes off. Main problem fr me is your camera, U can have a tighter camera.
Hi dam try adding a li'l bit of character and avoid a linear style.Try to break things up.I know its very early and it has more work.
The poses while he's flying away is nice and cartoony i loved it.
AT the head of the clip,Maybe he can go a li'l ahead,stop and look at the rocket and then come back and enter.I cudn't read the purpose of the red thingy in front of the door.If its a button or something then its not reading well.
Hi dam, I just love the concept really nice. when he enter u can show some attitude and putting rocket on his shoulder is very fast and next time he try to adjust it, like it's heavy,Little bit confuse about rocket wt.May be u r trying to show cartoony style. End part is good .
hi dam. its coming out. u got to have a gag for the funny part of animtion. & have some character to him in motion as well in thought process. which make the animation more empathatic. " take the character out of him"
Awesome concept!! loved it
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ReplyDeleteits too straight to the point. I think U should play with the gag here, may be show him strugglin a bit before the rocket takes off. Main problem fr me is your camera, U can have a tighter camera.
ReplyDeleteGood job so far ,but push it a little more.
Hi dam try adding a li'l bit of character and avoid a linear style.Try to break things up.I know its very early and it has more work.
ReplyDeleteThe poses while he's flying away is nice and cartoony i loved it.
AT the head of the clip,Maybe he can go a li'l ahead,stop and look at the rocket and then come back and enter.I cudn't read the purpose of the red thingy in front of the door.If its a button or something then its not reading well.
Hi dam, I just love the concept really nice.
ReplyDeletewhen he enter u can show some attitude and putting rocket on his shoulder is very fast and next time he try to adjust it, like it's heavy,Little bit confuse about rocket wt.May be u r trying to show cartoony style. End part is good .
hi dam. its coming out. u got to have a gag for the funny part of animtion. & have some character to him in motion as well in thought process. which make the animation more empathatic. " take the character out of him"
ReplyDeletethanks for ur gr8 comments folks ,I am going to change it....I am gonna re-block it ,to come over the fear of making changes.. :)
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